Sunday, December 11, 2011

A Quick Update

Hello, hello to anyone out there to anyone who actually reads this blog!

I wanted to post a quick update about the status of the book. So, here goes nothing:

* The working title as of this point is Blood From A Locket. The book is completed and undergoing some edits. From there I will make some changes, have it undergo some more edits and then I should be able to start shopping it around.

* Book 2, tentatively titled Bloodletting at this point, is three quarters done. I personally love the direction that book 2 takes the series after setting the ground rules in book 1.

Friday, October 7, 2011

Some Updates

So, I'm not sure how many people read this blog -- I know I have at least three followers, and I think I know them, but here are some updates about the book.

I'm still drawing a blank with the title, but I'm thinking it's going to have the word "blood" in it. I'm just unsure of what would fit with the book.

Reena Bains made me a terrific cover. Very beautiful. She has agreed to do covers for the entire five book series. Well, five book for now -- it did start as a trilogy. It's going to be wonderful to see her cover on my first book.

I'm still unsure of the route to take the book. First round edits are finished and I'm working on second round. Quin still hasn't looked at the book and Sheila only sent me the first few chapters edited. So I'm not too sure what's happening there. If I'm really lucky I can start getting things together by Christmas, but I feel that time frame slowly closing in...

Monday, September 12, 2011

Status Update!

Wow, so I really, really need to start updating this just a touch more, don't I?

A couple weeks ago, Quin and I went to a wedding for his good friends. There, I met an older couple who sat with us during the reception. Not knowing me very well, the woman became fairly excited when I told her what I was doing, and even went so far as to offer her services in editing my first draft.

My good friend Reena is working on covers for me as we speak. She sent me a rough idea of what she wants to do today and it looks beautiful. The color scheme is just incredible! So very exciting to see that dream coming together. Still having issues with a title, but that's going to come to me soon, I can feel it.

Currently, I'm sitting with the laptop in front of me, working on an author's note for the opening pages of the book. My draft is in the hands of the woman from the wedding and I am still waiting on her. Hopefully I'll get it back soon.

Thursday, August 25, 2011

Pet Peeves

So, I was sitting in my Transitions Workshop today, and we were all talking about things that push your buttons. And I thought -- I read a lot. And there are a lot of things that push my buttons in literature. So...I thought I would share a few, and maybe -- if anyone actually reads this blog -- maybe people will tell me in the comments section what sort of things in books push their buttons.

1. The Attitude Towards Death In Novels
If any author wants to kill off one of their characters, fine. If an author wants to kill its lead character, that's fine too -- after all, that was one of the bigger elements in 1940s cinema and it worked -- but whatever you do, don't write your main character's death in the first person. A finishing epilogue in the third person isn't such that bad of an idea, but it drives me bonkers to read a character writing their life's story all the way up until their final breath. In one book I read, the lead character wrote her story all the way up until her death -- in the water. VC Andrews' ghostwriters, I'm looking at you here -- you all are the worst for it.

2. Lack of Depth To A Character
I've always looked at creating a character like they're Michael Corleone from the Godfather. That, to me, is one of the most well-crafted characters of all time. The change, the depth, the range; it's what I strive my characters to be like, and I think it's what other authors should do with their characters. I feel that EVERY writer should know their characters like the back of their hand and should be able to tell you EVERYTHING about them. I also feel every good writer has an attachment to their protagonists in some way. If you can't feel attached, then why should your readers be attached? If you don't care about the characters, it shows to the readers.

3. Spelling Errors
Believe it or not, I've seen these in books. I read one book, an adaptation of The Burning Bed case, and it was just rife with spelling errors. I've also read a few with a couple of errors. It makes me want to throttle their editors. Spelling errors is one of my biggest pet peeves, and it just rips me completely out of the book.


Sunday, August 14, 2011

More News!

Wow...it finally feels like things are getting rolling.

So, where am I standing at the moment? Between workshop seminars, bedrooms flooding and the otherworldly chaos that life can throw at us sometimes, I've managed to get at least six chapters edited. I've added a few more scenes and a few more things to give the characters a more unique voice.

I have also managed to get in touch with my good friend Reena Bains, the basis for my character of Grace Heartilly, to do a cover for my book, which she should hopefully have done for December. Thankfully for me, she's agreed to do my cover, which is a huge honor and a privilege. Reena is an incredibly talented artist and the only person that I could think of to ask. The fact that she's agreed has made me happier than words can ever express.

I am also in the process of trying to think of a title for this saga. It's hard, I have to confess, trying to find something that will suit the story but pack a punch. There's such a rich tapestry I have here with Mirella, and I am really very thankful for everybody's support during this incredibly rewarding process. Somewhere along the way, Mirella became something of my vicarious daughter, a character that I relate and am attached to. It's a great feeling.

Mirella's saga is now going to span into five books, detailing her struggles and the decline of her world. It's a bold statement, but I'd like to think she's something of a Michael Corleone character, someone who is always changing, always torn between that side of trying to do right and the other side of being sucked into their environment. It's a difficult dichotomy, but I think it's a great way to look at character development.

Also, I'm starting to draft up the thank yous and acknowledgements for the beginning of the book. I have a lot of people to thank for their patience, their love and their support. I've also got a lot of bands to thank, as giving the characters specific musicians to listen to helped me develop them into different characters.

More updates are on the way, but at the moment, I'm just adding new scenes and editing. I'm also contemplating putting up another preview, but I'm unsure of what passage.

Thursday, August 11, 2011

Big Novel News!

Hello, everyone! Wow, it's been ages since I've been on here. Moving tends to make things jumbled, however.

So, an update on the first novel in the series: it's finished! I am currently up to my elbows in Latin and Italian translations, research notes and re-edits. At twenty-four chapters long -- twenty-six if you include the prologue and epilogue -- I'm proud to say that the first draft is finally all finished.

So, what's next, I suppose becomes the next question. I've currently got about four chapters re-edited, some characters re-tweaked and made a few changes to the structure and language of the characters. It's been one of the most frustrating, yet rewarding processes I've ever undertaken, and I am so proud of myself for making it through an idea. Once my re-editing process is over, then I plan on handing it off to a couple of people to take a look at it with a fresh eye. From there, who knows, but I feel like what I have in my hands is pretty special.

Any writer out there will more than likely admit that they have hundreds, if not thousands, of ideas floating around that they've never really finished or explored. John Grisham admits it in the introduction of my edition of A Time To Kill. I will most certainly admit that I'm horrible for not finishing ideas; on top of this series, I also have a bunch of other stories on the go as well. Will I finish most of them? I hope so. But it depends how much I get into the next idea.

Mirella's series was initially started with the idea of being a trilogy. Somewhere along the way it's spawned into a whopping five novels, and maybe more down the line if I really start getting into it. I find that I've become very attached to Mirella Cannellucci, a character that I have spent two years breathing life into. I've crafted everything from birthdays, appearances, tattoos, her behavior, her habits, her music likes, her movie likes. I've spent so much time crafting her into a strong, yet conflicted character, that I feel like she could be my daughter. I'm sure this is how Anne Rice felt creating Lestat, or how Charlaine Harris felt creating the amazing Sookie Stackhouse, or -- in the vein of my novels -- how Laurell K. Hamilton felt crafting Anita Blake.

Friday, March 18, 2011

Story Passage

Ladies and gentlemen, without further ado, here is the opening passage from my first novel...


Mirella

The changes came swift over Sommerfield about six months ago; people started going missing in droves, leaving local law enforcement baffled as to what was going on. No trace whatsoever of these people; no bodies. Thanks in part to what’s going on around here, the streets are almost always barren now. The fear in the air here is so thick that I practically suffocate on it every time I leave my apartment.
For me, things began to pick up both personally and professionally for me about a year and a half ago, about a week before Halloween. It was almost nine, and I was waiting for the bus, thankful to be out of my late-night European History class, while at the same time dreading the ridiculous amount of homework that my instructor Steven Hargrove had levelled upon me for the weekend. It was also one of those rare nights that I was just too disinterested and too aggravated to fully concentrate on the class. Why would I want to stay around and listen to the whispers from the others about how I’m some kind of freak? Anyways, why sit and listen about the past when the future seems so much less uncertain?
The campus that night was surprisingly dark; even surreal, like something right out of A Nightmare on Elm Street. Fog rolled into the campus, weaving its way around light posts that cast a pale yellow light before cutting off abruptly a few feet away from me.
Sommerfield was surprisingly cold that autumn, cold enough that I was almost certain the snow would fall any day. I sat alone at the bus stop bundled up excessively like that little kid from A Christmas Story -- you know, the one that couldn’t put his arms down? I looked like I belonged in Alaska, my Godhead-riddled iPod lost in one of the seemingly hundreds of pockets on this burgundy parka of mine.
Even with all of the disappearances happening in this town, I didn’t fear for my safety for a second, and it has nothing to do with my indifference towards things. It was because I knew the unspeakable truth, and the only fear that I felt was for how out-of-control the situation was becoming. I mean, sure, I could always step forward and tell the police what was going on, but if I told them they’d have me committed in a heartbeat, and in the end, that would help nobody. Besides, I could barely believe it myself when I found out the truth, so why should I expect anyone else to buy into it?
It didn’t take long for me to sense another presence in the parking lot. Another presence that was less than human. It was a different kind of aura than a patrolling security guard, who I hadn’t seen in almost forty-five minutes. I pulled the ear bud headphones out of my ears and stood to greet my new “friend”, squinting in the darkness in the hopes of seeing just who it was.
The glass of the bus station shattered behind me, and I felt two strong arms clasped around my waist. I was pulled back so fast that I had no time to brace for anything. His buddy across the parking lot charged at lightning speed. I brought up both feet and planted a firm dropkick to his chest as I fell backwards to the concrete, struggling to break from the grip. I managed to scramble to my feet, pulling my serrated blade out of the inside sleeve of my jacket, shrugging off my parka and throwing it down to the ground. Too bulky, too constricting. I assumed my best fighting stance.
The duo charged at me, hoping that their speed would be enough to throw me off. I managed to duck it, hitting them with a jumping double kick. I stumbled on the way down, landing awkwardly, hand-first, on the shattered glass. “Fuck,” I murmured. I could feel the warm blood seeping through my glove. They could smell the first drop of blood, their pupils dilating in pleasure, mouths contorting in a sadistic, feral snarl. They charged again. I ducked one and pierced the other through the heart with the blade. He let out a piercing howl before collapsing to dust on the concrete.
In the distance, coming down the hill of the campus, I could see two more sprinting, almost shadow-like, coming towards me and Ned the security guard. The one I was currently fighting with tried to trip me up, but I planted a good, firm kick to his nose. I heard it crunch on impact.
I turned in time to be hit by some random student, sending us down and sliding along the concrete, his chubby body straddling mine, crimson eyes glowing in satisfaction, his fingers digging hard into my shoulders. My blade fell out of my hand and skittered along the concrete, of course landing just out of my reach. The other two tried to swarm me, but he turned his head back, snarling, growling. I knew what that meant; he was telling them that they could have what was left of me when he was finished. I refused to acknowledge the chill that crawled through my spine.
He turned his attention back to me, leaning his head back in the moonlight, fangs emerging from yellowed teeth. He came in to bite me quick, but I put my forearm to his throat and attempted to hold him at bay. The other vampires were howling, screeching. I could smell a heavy, metallic scent in the air; I wondered if they had turned on one another.
The adrenaline was coursing through me. More than my life was at stake here; the salvation of the town was as well. No matter what was happening at this given moment, there was no way that failure was an option.
Saliva dripping from his fangs, he loomed forward a little more, trying hard to sink his teeth into my neck. This entire situation felt like it was going on forever, but I know in reality it was only a matter of seconds, minutes. His breath was so rancid I was convinced it would knock me unconscious. He pushed forward harder, as did I, but I was fully aware of the bitch of a reality: things were looking pretty grim for me. With each passing minute, my chances of making it home were slipping through my fingers. What was I thinking? These guys are way stronger than I am. Vampires generally are.
A deafening crack echoed through the sky, followed by piercing howls that abruptly stopped. I opened my eyes in time to see a steel toed boot hit my assailant in the face, knocking him off of me. On his feet in seconds like a scalded cat, he let out one last hiss before disappearing with the other surviving vampire. I breathed a shallow sigh of relief as the familiar face of my good friend and colleague Caterina Brooks stood over me, her trademark portable crossbow in hand, an amused smirk on her face. She offered me her hand.
“You are so lucky that I decided to stay late tonight and do that project for Muriel’s class,” she informed me matter-of-factly as she helped me to my feet.
“Jesus,” I breathed, turning to the bus station and allowing myself to shiver at all the broken glass. “I really owe you huge, you know that?”
“Just get in the car,” she said to me. “I’ll take you back to headquarters and you can fill out the paperwork.” I nodded. Thanking my lucky stars that Caterina had in fact stayed late, I slowly made my way to her silver Toyota, sliding into the passenger’s side and resting my head against the seat. Caterina was collecting the arrows she had fired. Rule number six; never leave a trace of yourself behind. Unfortunately, I had learned that one that hard way.
When she gathered her arrows up, she made her way back to the car, and we drove off as the bus pulled into the loop. What a bitch.

Saturday, March 12, 2011

So A Bit of an Update...

Hello, hello to everyone who actually reads this stuff. I thought I would post an update and let everyone know what's been happening with this series since it's been quite a while since my last update, when I introduced everybody to Mirella's deceased/undead sister Amy Lynn.

The most important thing I can say is that yes, this series is still active, though I'm not as active on it as I was right now. I will be again, but sometimes the best thing to do is take a step back and work on other things. Returning with a fresh eye and new ideas and developments for Mirella and the gang I think will be the best thing for the series right now, which will more than likely end up as a quadrilogy.

I've started working on a few other novels, but this is still an important series on my palette, and knock on wood, I am hoping to have the first novel done by the end of the summer, or by the very latest, the end of the year. Within the next week or so I will be getting back to Mirella's saga and her journey through love, loss and danger. But I just wanted to let everyone know who is reading this that I do plan on continuing with this novel, and maybe within the next few days I will post an excerpt from the first novel.

Saturday, January 29, 2011

Just A Bit About The Series...

So, with my laptop on the fritz at the moment, I thought I would touch base and, instead of doing a character sketch, talk about the ideas that I have for this series of novels.

I initially started the first novel back in the summer of 2009, before my old Acer laptop crashed and took my entire story with it. Unfortunately, I didn't get the opportunity to back it up before it went out, and I lost 46 pages of work. Thankfully, through longhand writing and a decent memory, I managed to rewrite everything and more thus far.

The residents live in the fictional Okanagan town of Sommerfield, a place that I've made about two hours away from the hustling-bustling city of Kelowna, where the main character was born.

Initially, it was told in the third person point of view, where I could focus on the Slayers, the vampires and the supporting characters. It felt clunky, though, and I didn't particularly like the way it flowed. So, after talking with my friend Nikki Locking, I opted instead to make it in the first person point of view. Initially, it was just going to be in the point of view of Mirella, my lead character; however, as time went on, I decided to test out different voices and added the points of views of Jenna McCoy, Shane Carpenter and Kristen Kennedy. Their character backgrounds and photographs will be up when I finally have my laptop back.

I've always loved vampires. When I was in the fifth grade, I finally got a chance to read Bram Stoker's Dracula. I grew up watching stuff like Salem's Lot and John Carpenter's Vampires. I consider Anne Rice to be arguably the greatest vampire novelist alive. With the new resurgence in popularity of vampires, thanks in large part to The Vampire Diaries, Twilight and True Blood, I was very reluctant to really pursue anything with these novels. My friends seem to find something special in what I'm writing here, though I'm still iffy. In all fairness, though, while this is a vampire novel, it's more about the relationships of the humans. About grief, about the feeling of loss, of being lost. It's about finding your own path when the people around you don't make you feel like you belong. It's about finding strength and exploiting strength.

As a female, I find myself attracted to strong females in literature. Unfortunately, I've never really and truly come across one that I find likable. I understand that in life, things are never truly black and white, but I find characters to be wishy-washy, irritating, grating, manipulative. My hopes is that I could create enough strong characters that could stand out of a crowd. Women who aren't afraid to be leaders, be zeroes, be bitches. Women who embrace their curves, embrace their skinniness, embrace the things that people always nitpick at. Some things will go easy, some roads will be bumpy, just as is life. With the exception of vampires, I would like to try and make this as realistic as possible.

I wanted the idea of a girl who has in essence lost her path. Estranged from her parents, grieving the death of her older sister in a nasty car accident, Mirella had left town, returning after her boyfriend at the time had found a place in Sommerfield. Unfortunately for Mirella, she would soon learn that the lines she thought divided fantasy and reality were more blurred than she could ever comprehend. Thrust into a world she's unsure of, and doesn't really want any part of, and spurned and scorned by the others who see her as an outsider and an ice queen, Mirella has to try and find her place while doing everything she can to survive.

Mirella's biggest nemesis is a vampire master named Caleb. I envisioned a vampire, trapped inside his favorite era of time, with a beautiful wife on his arm. The fabled eternal love story that every vampire looks up to and admires. Mirella turns it into a tragedy, opening up a nasty feud between Caleb and the team of slayers. Massacres ensue, lives are lost, and Mirella finds herself practically drowning in grief.

I'd initially thought of making it just a trilogy, but it doesn't appear that it's going to work that way. Mirella's story is a rich, dangerous, often light, often dark journey that takes her to the very edge of her sanity and of her faith.